amazing poem! really really really well done, i agree with Nada, it is freaky but it is still amazing! 5/5 for sure. take care.
~Rae

A waterfall cascades down the sheer drop mountain
beautiful start!
wow, this is really good, the detail in it is so vivid and the meaning is somewhat vague with the idea of it right in front of you, very good elements in this kind of poem, i really liked the descriptions, they were beautiful, keep up the good work! 5/5