Comments : A Wnitery Smile! (True one)

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hi mates,

    i wrote this poem monthes ago,its a true stroy still going infront of my eyes for a woman i really know,she couldn't chose the one she loves,couldn't spend her life with em,was forced to marry another guy,everybody thinks that she is happy,but i dont know,

    Sadness and coldness are there on her face! its really terrible to live like that though,i wouldn't want to live like that ! no way!

    ok,hope you like it : )

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    heyyyyyyyy Rua is back :o) about time too, but at least the new poem was worth the wait. 5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww. I wish things could change for her. Forced marriages degrade women. Thankfully, the Us doesn't do that. I'll talk to God for the woman in need. Great poem though! 5

    Love,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Oh..Yes Kermin, this poem is true, and yeah its so sad, Glad to have you here reading and welcomeing me back : )

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hiii Jay mate, Thanks alot : )

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hello Heather,
    nice of you to pray for her, but some how i believe that it won't make any difference ! anyway

    Thanks : )

  • 19 years ago

    by SSBAL

    CANADIAN! so sad...give your friend my best. where are you? we need some more CANANDIAN spirit here
    luv ya
    jo

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Oh no Jo, she is not canadian!
    and i know am not here, i mean i dont know whats going on with me, but am so silent these days. I dont know what to say!

    cheerz
    Rua Francis.

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    aww. great poem </3

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hey Thank you dOra, I will check your poem, Thank you Broken Hearted for your comment.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nice poem, Rua. I really enjoyed it. It was sad and a bit heartbreaking. Nicely expressed. Good job:)