Keeping

by xxxxxxxxmary   May 19, 2005


I used to think love was a bad feeling
Love bought tears to peoples eyes without the ending even starting
Love hurt people without people even knowing
Love can make you trip but deep down inside you know your already falling
but now that I'm in love, I stay up dreaming
With my Eyes wide up, Sometimes seeing
My heart already breaking
I wake up screaming
5 minutes later hoping
that what I brought into my dream wasn't reality it was something I dreamt when I was sleepin
But in the end I know what we have is something
I plan on Keeping

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Sachi*~

    I love the rhyme scheme here--I could even hear a beat in my head pounding lightly in tune with it, lol. . . I may have read it differently than what you intended it to be, but I can't help that . . .
    great job, and I REALLY like this poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Yu Lee

    This is such a great poem..^-^

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    That's so cute. I love it! Great job!
    Love,
    BJ

  • 19 years ago

    by cait

    I really like this one. its really good. you're a great writer. keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andriana

    Aww. this one is cute. excellent write.

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