Aww. this one is cute. excellent write.

Aww. this one is cute. excellent write.

I really like this one. its really good. you're a great writer. keep it up.

That's so cute. I love it! Great job!
Love,
BJ

This is such a great poem..^-^

I love the rhyme scheme here--I could even hear a beat in my head pounding lightly in tune with it, lol. . . I may have read it differently than what you intended it to be, but I can't help that . . .
great job, and I REALLY like this poem!