Empty

by Xo The Forgotten One oX   May 19, 2005


Sitting in this lonely corner,
listening to the rain.
Puddles gather,
wondering what caused all this pain.

My life is empty,
a deep dark hole,
knowing i don’t have anything left,
not even my soul.

the tears,
a never ending stream.
given up on everything,
even my biggest dream.

ending life,
not such a bad thought.
everything i’ve been through
everything i’ve fought.

doesn’t matter,
no one cares,
even though people say,
gentle silent prayers.

given up,
lost hope,
here i am,
dangling from a rope.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Halston Mather

    I really like this poem. Short, sweet, and to the point. And the same is offered to you...if you want to talk...let me know.:)

  • 19 years ago

    by AMANDA

    Hey thnx for your comment....and i just read your poem and u do have a talent for poetry.......dont ever doubt your self or your writing..cuz the writing comes from the heart....ok......dont ever forget that......no matter if some one has one that sounds good to......yours is always gonna be unique.......ok........nice poem and keep up the good work.......bye.........lov amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Aww hun. This is quite sad :(
    Nicely written, but i hope you're okay <3

    [Thanks for the comment to hun]
    Luvvoo,

    Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    This is really great. That's pretty much all I can say. I'm speechless... excellent poem.

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