Wonderful read. You create the perfect image of a girl in excrutiating pain calling out silently. I love the masquerade that you expose and the incredible symbols of anguish of which you exposed it in. I absolutly loved these lines,
"Paper, or plastic smiles
In tune with my image of the week
Hand in hand mistakes
Coincidentally fall right in sync"

A perfect way to describe the image held up for those who would never understand the stance.
Well done, beautiful.

Your poem was absolutely wonderful. The way it flows so smoothly is incredible. It's so easy to picture absolutely everything that's happening. Great job.

I loved ur poem.U did a wonderful job.I understood ur emotions and ur words are just I can't explain how u did the word excellent sums it up.

wow, that's awesome.
you have such a way with words, the way you talk about everything...so many people can relate for so many different reasons because you brought out so many battles in that.