I see the real you, but if you dont open up how can I? Brilliant poem, I love you.. keep it up xxxxxx

I really liked this poem it describes just how I feel. Like i'm an ugly worthless girl that no one understands. I just have to remember that someone out there really does love me for me! Keep up the great work! 5/5

~As Always~
*Left_2_Die*

wonderful poem! really creative!

~PLP~ lil slam~

Loved how you used a photograph. Very creative. Believe me, it might not seem that anyone can see the real you, but your view on things can be changed alot my sadness or depression. It might not seem that people care, but you'd be supriced how many people notice your smiles or tears. Hope things get easier for you hun, in the mean time, vent the negative feelings you can with poetry, it always makes a poem that bit better if they're from the heart. Anyway, I drifted off the poem abit there, it was very well written, keep it up xxx

I agree with all the above!
I loved the way you used the idea of photgraphs and I also understand the feelings that noone sees the real you or the pain you feel. I guess at some point you just have to open up enough for other people to see the truth.
great poem
5/5 from me too!
x

Great idea for a poem. I gave it 5/5!

Well done. that poem is so good! keep up the gud work i espehailly (sp) like the last verse of it :).

~@L€X~

You don't know how much i relate

~*Great Poem*~

This is a really good poem. Now you owe me a comment. Go read one of my poems and dont forget to vote and comment

I love this. It's very orginal. Good job!

~Rach

Great Poem!!! I Like it very much!!! Hope you could go check out mine wen evr u have time!!! :)