Voices

by Elissa   May 20, 2005


Can you here them
Can you here them calling
Their pushing you
And now your falling

They remind you
Of ever little sin
And all you've done wrong
They tell you, you can't win

Your a loser
That's all you'll ever be
You will always be bound
Never free

You can't do things right
Your better off dead
No one likes you
All these thought in your head

All your evil deeds
Never leave your mind
Because of the damn voices
Peace you will never find

They like to see you suffer
And feel so much pain
They don't want you to forget things
They want you to go insane

Why can't they leave you alone
Can't they let it all go
Why can't we forget
This we will never know

-Please vote and comment I would really appreciate it-

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  • 19 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    i hear ya on this!! :)
    *~peace and love~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I like that and so true indeed. Keep it up and keep writing.

    Jennifer aka CRAZE

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    right off the bat
    ever -should be- every
    other then that it was pretty good. I think if you explained the voices abit more and gave us a clue into when and when you got them the story line would be abit more involved. If you get a chance please gaze upon any of my featured poems please vote and comment while you gaze take care...

  • 19 years ago

    by joaana

    i know what you mean ,your poem just explained my feelings

  • 5/5 elissa, loved it. i hear voices sometimes lol.
    love always
    your friend
    harley