oh... poor you...
(checked out your other poems... you'll get an award in no time!)

both parts are gud.. lykd em all.. keep up the gud work
take care
nouna

That was even better than part one! The thing I really liked about this, is that it wasn't exactly the same style as part one. It had a different feeling.. more angry than sad, and the flow changed a bit. very nice,
5/5 from me : )
xox
Robin