by Brookeღ
It's hard to leave your friends. You will probably end up staying friends with most all of them. I have stayed in touch with most all of my friends from highschool. I can understand how emotional this is for you! Take Care and Good Luck! Brooke~ |
very emotional parting..great poem |
by PinkLaces
I can understand how you're feeling, very nice poem. |
by EoB
That is really good...Simple, yet sad and interesting... |
That Title Is So True! And Your Like So Hott! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Lyla
I love your poetry. You have a totally different style then me but its really good! |
by Robert
This is a beautiful poem. Well done. |
by Naima
amazing!!! I felt that way when I left middle school. I didn't thikn for a second that it would turn out like it did. It was ana amzing time for me. I loved it! I still miss a lot of the people that I went to school with because a lot of them I really don't see anymore. I miss those days and I feel twinges of nostalgia thiinking about it and from reading your poem. Here you are again! Another brilliant piece of art!!!! |
by Carmen
aw...*pouts* im sorry i miss school too, but im going back in two months, so its not as bad as you |
by paulina.♥
Aww. Very nice poem.I like the way it flowed. You're talented, dear. Keep writing and stay strong. |
by Kia
i love this poem.... its great.... and so sad.... im so scared to graduate next year.... i dont want to do it.. great poem |
by Chad
Very good...I loved the flow. |
by Natalie
Awww wow. That kinda reminded me when I left school, But it was different, Cause I was expelled. And I used to hate going to school and when I found out I was getting kicked out, I didn't wanna leave and now I miss it lots. |
by Sean Allen
I liked it, and the rhyme was interesting, ABCC. However, I think that this poem lacks a lot of the details that are present in your current poems. I haven't read enough of your old ones to say whether or not that is true in general for them, but speaking specifically, I think that you've improved from the viewpoint of this poem -- you've become more original, more personalize. I will say that a detail I did enjoy was the inclusion of your town name, that was a nice touch. |