i really appreciate your comment ... thanks very much i liked this poem also .. sad tho... hope things get better if they arent already !!!! 5/5

-much love for you sabrina

OMG that was breath taking and that's alot coming from me. WOW, don't even worry about this poem cause it is REALLY good. 5/5

i think that was an excellent poem and i might not know what your going threw but i think it might be serious

keepup the goodwork!!!!

it was very good and u were really brave

this is really good and you totally should be proud of it. i wish that would happen to be but i guess nobody will ever understand! keep it up its really good
Polly ~X~

hey thats a really good poem. i wished my mom would do something like that. she keeps putting off me going to the therapist. and everytime i try to tell her i'm suicidal, she starts blaming herself and forgetting all of my problems. going on about how shes a bad mother, well hello its not helping if i'm cutting everynight and showing them off waiting for someone to help. and once i figured they weren't helping, i decided i should end it all, after i ran away and got caught, they still didn't see and so i tried suicide. three dang times. well, very nice poem. read some of mine if ya ever get bored.

love the poem i hope things get better for ya smart chose about life cause no matter how hard life gets u should never give up that chanse of life u only have one life to live and theres always ups and downs in life everyone gets them i hope u get better xoxo

OMG this is soo good i love ir gr8 wokr 5/5 :D

That was an awesome poem

WOW, one of the best poems I have ever read, it almost made me cry. Very emotional and strongly written!!! I can really relate to this one, I'm dealing with the same feelings, I just can't reach out my hand for help....yet!!!
Keep up the good work...

*Hugs Sabrina*

wow you are very talented great job

hey u really don't need 2 change anythin on this poem! its excellent! 6/5 lol. if this is true, please talk to me coz ive been there! tiger_666999@hotmail.com. lv ya lots cez x x x

it was great keep up the great work i hope the best to you

i really liked it cuz itz almozt the zame thing that happend to me but i had my dads gun haha but even if life iz unfair there iz a reazon we are here it may take you a long time to figure out why you are here but killing yourezelf wont do any good juzt imagine the way your mom would feel zo take care

Good Job, you have a great gift and don't waste it. Just remember that you have a lot of people here for you. Remember that, and if you ever feel like that again, think of everyone you'd hurt, you don't realize how many people care, until something happens. Keep up the great work!!

this poem is really good!!! did you really go through all of this...well if u did then we have alot in common...because i did too....

i love it

This I have to say is one of the best poems I have ever heard!! Glad that you put down that knife gurl, I've been through the same thing b4,
lataz

That poem has so much meaning.
That's just a wonderful poem!
Great job and keep up the good work.
My best wishes.

-Ces

your good and i hope you never think of doing something like that again and we all have our days but its worth holding on