wow!
wot a good poem!

It's quite a good poem and it makes me wish that I ran to my mom instead of cutting myself. It's very inspirational and I give it a two thumbs up!!

behindmysmile

Very good poem! I don't think there is anything in here to 'fix'. Keep them coming.

Rebecca.

........wow thats really good!!!!like one of the best i have ever read.....good job

do not change this poem its the best and most of all god bless you and your mother

good job, very inspirational

woah..that was the saddest poem ive ever read..u made a smart move and dropped the knife.uve got guts and i respect that.keep strong and stay awsome 4 me..K?

EXCELLENT! I don't think you should change anything. Wow...you are so lucky that you have a mom like that.Keep holding on...I think you are really brave. Please read some of my poems and tell me what you think!

Thank you everyone for commenting on this! It really means alot. It helps when people back me up. Thanks so much!
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

That put chills all up my body. I really do have goosebumps everywhere. If this is true, I'm so very proud of you. I wish I had the courage to do that. I don't think my moms' quite like yours. But your awesome, and I can't wait to read more.

WOW!! That is amazing! I really got the message! Keep Smillin'! peace xo

B-E-A-UTIFUL i loved that. but i am sorry that you had those types of difficulties. i will listen if you need some one to talk to. most of my friends think i am crazy too. but its good to hold strong, it means that life can only get better in some ways. Know what i mean?
much love
~michelle~

God Bless u have the one thing I didn't a mother that was there for u when u needed the help and also the courage to go to her and seek for help.
please rate mines.thanx

Thats a really good poem
i like it alot, keep up the good work

heeey great achievement! Here to congratulate you..

Thanks for showing everyone that you're able to overcome this =)

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM TO PIECES! IT MADE ME CRY AND SORRY YOU HAD T GO THROUGH ALL THAT IF YOU DID! I THIN IT WAS WELL WRITTEN AND HOPE YOU NEVER STOP WRITING! I GIVE YOU THE BEST OF LUCK <3 Jessica

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM TO PIECES! IT MADE ME CRY AND SORRY YOU HAD T GO THROUGH ALL THAT IF YOU DID! I THIN IT WAS WELL WRITTEN AND HOPE YOU NEVER STOP WRITING! I GIVE YOU THE BEST OF LUCK <3 Jessica

OMG its so sad but written very beautifully i cried it was great. And it had so much emotion. Stay strong.

I love your poem, I can relate to it pretty well.

:-( very sad.. very good.. if this is true... you have amazing courage.