This poem is perfect. I loved it. I tried committing suicide but God always has something stored for you. |
WOW!!! That was a GREAT poem. It may one day help me out. I'm proud of you for changing your mind like that. God really works in mysterious ways. |
by amanda v
WOW!!!!!!!!thats an eye opener i was falling a sleep till i read urs it woke me right up and thats a good thing. |
by LostDreamer
That was a great poem.. im glad that you didn't go through with it!.. stay strong.. keep writing! |
by LostDreamer
That was a great poem.. I'm glad that you didn't go through with it!.. stay strong.. keep writing! |
by Jasonsboo
That was a beautiful poem! You are a very talented writer! And you deserve a 5/5 which I am giving you on this poem..I hope to see more of your work. Keep writing your a great poet and you have a wonderful talent for writing poems! Maybe, if you want...You could read a few of my poems and comment on them!?!?!?! It would mean a lot to me. |
by Erin
That was a very good poem** its very inspirational to all thoes cutters out there and how they can come down to a conclusion that there is something you can do, and theres always someone you can go to if you need help. no matter wat. It was a very good poem keep up the good work*~~! |
by Jordan
Omg thank you to everyone who has read, voted, or written a comment! It seriously means so much to me. |
by tiffany
WOW! great! i loved it very emotional and i love the ending and the choice made! 5! |
by Crystal
I love your poem.. i cut.. i just dont have enouf courage to put down the knife.. i'm so happy that u r still here.. that poem was touching.. i voted 5:) |
by Heather
Jordan:Your Strong And I Hope You Stay That Way! Good Luck In The Future! |
by melanie
You don't even know how many lives you could change and save with that. I used to cut, and this is the reason i stopped. not from the reassurance of my mom, she is still too blind...My best friend, haley, did that for me. She was there for me. Not like my other friends, cause they cut too. I loved it, and you deserve a million dollars for writing it....godbless, and thanx for the comment on my poem, it meant a lot to me.... |
by Nikki
Wow I love all of your peoms but this one is my favorite... |
by Brady
I love you so much and to read what you where going through helps me understand. |
This poem reminds me alot about my life, except difference is my mum didn't help me, she took things away from me, made me dump my bf, and grounded me, lol. spewin. anyways this is a really good poem. well hit me back if ya have time... |
by Brady
I Like this one alot I like your mom to :-) Im glad she is there to help you through things |
by Anick
Wonderful! |
by katrina
Oh my God i started crying...I know exactly how that feels. It was like reading my own pain and then salvation. |
Wow, jordan i got to hand it to ya dat is a good yet very sad poem...i read dat and it gave me goosebumps so yeah i have poems that i wrote when i was seventeen but i lost my username and stuff but u commented on my poems if you remember my name is veronica freeman but it has changed to veronica stirewalt but yeah i will put my poems on here so you can go over them to see what i need to fix kk bye now |
by JSydney
=[ that is beautiful... thank you... |