for some people that is how they sleep at nite as how you write poetry to sleep at nite,,,good poem though it is your feelings and your opinion, grammaticaly??? I like it

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You expressed your opinion very well! Very well done! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

good poem and you expressed yourself well.....it was unique and i enjoyed but i do agree with Nada