Comments : Plotted Course

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    that's really deep, i love it, great work aaron.

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i love metaphorical poetry and this is surely a prime example of it. Sometimes, in life, a part of the ride is not knowing where you're going...and don't envy the train...it has it's destinations, but we as people, get to explore a myraid of places and things. Besides, you're young....and you have so much to offer the world and vast opportunities in the future!

    Love you!

    ps. Sorry I haven't been around much anymore. I realize I've just left you out of everything & missed stories of you and Ali. I'd love to catch up sometime.... I miss you!

    ps...keep up the amazing work! the poem was one of your best 5/5