by *~*Soldier Lover*~* May 21, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
family
You don't even remember. |
by Sherry Lynn
Releasing the hurt and anger through writing is always a plus to me. No one can tell you how to improve a poem with so much emotion behind it; that would be like telling someone how to feel. |
by Brookeღ
Written with such deep emotion. A poem like this it's hard for someone to help you improve it. It came straight from your heart! You did a great job expressing how you really feel and that is a good release. Good work! Take Care! Brooke~ |