Wow... powerful. It was amazing..I think one of my favorite poems I've read on this site : ) Really sad though, hope you're alright : ( 5/5 from me..
xox
Robin-

Good poem, well done, Im sorry you feel like this, I would miss you if you died, even though you have been writing less often I would miss your wonderful poetry and all the support you have given me, thank you, well done on this poem, it was short but still enjoyable and well written, keep it up and I hope things can get better for you

I'm sure you would be greatly missed! It's so sad to hear that you feel this way! Very well expressed! Take Care! Brooke~

Hey hun! I'd miss you! Come on smile girl!!! I'm here for you all the way. I hope you are ok. This poem was brilliant but left a lump in my throat. Let me know you are alright. :)

actually I think its quite good...its got a real good rhyme scheme, excellent flow and its short and to the point,,,,this poem was written from the heart

Talk to me please sabbi - i need a friend badly - i'm really in a mess. Just read my new poem. Amanda

again nice poem

It isn't bad, but could use some improvemnt, especially when it comes to the rhytm...and there are a few errors..

But still...I think it is a good poem, despite the fact that it is a clichè...I can sense the emotions you put into this piece, and that doesn`t happen too often to me=)

Try to make it flow better, and consider using a few other words (here instead of there, to want instead of for wanting)

Hey i'm ok - just a bit shocked that's all. I'll be ok so don't worry about me.Hope you are ok. :)

your like one of the best writers on this site seriously! you are sooo talented I love ALL your poems keep it up 5/5

Aww it’s sad poem cause I can understand it. I like your poems, there short and interesting. I’m gonna read some more and add you to my favourites. Well done Hun
xox

great poem i know how ya feel

i thought this poem was really good. i can tell you put alot of emotion into it. you didnt force any rhyming and the wording was perfect..awesome job 5/5

It's good, beyond great, and i'll miss you if you're not here, i'm glad i found you, keep up with your medication, it makes me happy that you are not thinking of suicide anymore...cause then i'll be crying over you..:'(

luv ya...
LOVE...PEACE..:p
-ANGEL OF THE ALIVE-

Hey! great poem! i didnt at all think for a second that it was bad!
your an excetional poet!
i love all your work! as for most of it i can relate in some kind of way!
this poem was deffinatley written by the heart and not the brain1 and that is what makes it so good!
Please look at my work! none of them are like yours! But i think that you may like some of them! Maybe not! but hey! id still like to know what you thought!
Love Paige
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