i agree to be carful
but if all you have is fear
it will take a long time for you to find love you trust
i just broke up with my girlfriend after 2 years
but at the begining i was afraid to love her.
i told myself to suck it up.
and ill tell you , iv never loved anyone more than i loved her.
so i agree be carful.
but dont be afraid.
good job

it has A GOOD POINT well done....sorry my nephew wa\s is playing with the keyboard..

This one is short, but good. I like it.

Love,
Tiff

wow you're pretty good for a starter! I know you have a heart because from what i can tell your very nice! Keep it up! 5

hmmm... i liked the idea of it, but i didn't like the repition of some of the words and phrases. it kinda sounded weird, like the "i love yous" are empty, and the heart. but it was still a greay idea.

that was really good for a beginner...i was nothingcompared to this on my first poem...haha. take care xxxx

great job!!

i can totally relate to this one....

God Bless!!

Excellent poem:) I like it

I can feel the pain behind the words in this poem, you have conveyed this well!

Keep Writing
Nici

I LIKE YOUR POEM IS SO TRUE U CAN NEVER JUST TRUST ANYONE WITH YOUR HEART

wow. That goes deeper than most. Short and to the point. I like it. good job. kilman = David B. 5/5

Great job man! 5/5

It's short, but good for a beginner. I read your post and you said you weren't very good, but you must be crazy. This poem is great! Keep writing, if you practice, you can only get better!

-Ice