very powerful!! and emotional! awesome write!! 5/5.
Hayley-Ree xxx

Filled with emotion! Very well expressed! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

I Loved Every Word Of It 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wonderfully great. ^^ -hope you keep writing-

aww.. these kinds of poems make me feel sad, infact they break my heart... but it was very good.. your doing a great job writing, keep up the good work! *KISSES*~Corrie