by Hayley Marie
great write. 5/5 |
by No Motiv?
My favorite part was "In this square shaped world only we can go far"....that's simply ingenious. The rest of them poem....I liked the rhyming scheme and the message portrayed. Great job. |
by EoB
Agree with No Motiv..that was my fav part. |
by EoB
Agree with No Motiv..that was my fav part. |
by Arora
It all sounds good... maybe you can work on the last verse a bit though n_n |
by Corrie
very nice! i liked it! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie |