Well...the caps for every beginning letter of the word really threw me off....in fact, it made reading hard. The message is clear, yet still vague - it's hard to connect with the simplicity.

i like this poem you expressed a lot of emotion and thats what i like in a poem...

This one also lacks a complete rhyming scheme, which destorys the flow...

Most of the stanzas have rhymes, but some doesn't...Either that signifies that you were unable express what you wanted to with rhymes, or that you are very progressive...

As for the poem, it is filled with emotions, which is very important...

The message is once again easy to find, and you present it in a nice way...

good one

good, emotioanl poem, well done and keep writing

I do like it - my honest opinion. I think it was written with alot of thought and it is beautifully written. :)

hey hayley guess who this is WCMD!!! i like your poem thought id let ya know c u in skool!!! x.x.x.x.x

I love your poems. all your poems rock. I love the way you write them.
love you so much,
marjan