by Schmitty May 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
All of my dreams have been broken |
It's good. Keep up the writing. The only thing I could say is to make sure your stanzas match a bit better. Otherwise it's good. Nice job |
by chelle
really good poem!! keep writing |
hey that was greatt |
by celi
nice poem! waiting for more! |
Cool poem! Good job. |