by Hayley Marie May 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My Mom And Dad Have Split, |
by Hayley Marie
thanks guys!!! means alot!!! xx |
by Amanda
Hey another good poem but needs a little work on the rhyming scheme. like katie said - it doesn't matter. Nice piece though - i'll give it a 4! :) |
by katie!
good poem, sorry this happened, it was emotional and although the flow was different and not continuous it doesnt matter as many poems do not need to flow to be good, like enslavement said, well done and keep it up :) xxx |
by EoB
Good poem... |
by ASPHYXIATED
twas a good poem.... |