I really enjoyed this poem. It really flowed well together and I understood it perfectly. You captured the pain really well and I love every line. Good work! 5/5

Love Sarah

wow that was an excellent poem! 5.0 I loved it a lot! I totally understand how you feel because in a way i am going through the same thing right now. The cuting, the fake smiles...(my cuts still remain also) everything! I know we may not be best friends and were not really close and all but I still care about you and i hate to see you suffer and cut yourself! Please dont! You dont realize how many ppl truly care abt u, and how lucky you are! i know you may not think so...but take the life you have now because later you will realize it was the best thing you ever had! (i think) lol!

Just know that if you ever need to talk, cry, or just need a laugh, you can come to me! I will always be here for you! And infront of me you dont have to pretend! Feel better! ♥

* BUT DONT TAKE THE LIFE YOU HAVE NOW...FOR GRANTED becuase later you will realize it was the best thing you ever had! (i think) lol!

Sooryy error there!

Great poem. I loved the ending. Stay strong.
Take care always,
- Shell.

OMG! Please don't tell me you feel this way! Pretty please don't cut yourself! I care about you and always will! I'll always be here for you when you need somebody to talk to! I wuv you! But please don't do anything to hurt yourself! Please! Oh yea, and awsome poem! Wuv you forever! <3

~Krissy

*hugs*

I can really relate to it. It flowed very well, and a great way of expressing my feelings. Keep up the good work.
~Rachel

Great flow i loved it
fivers
~HazE