by Darien May 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Died For Love |
by Natalie
Tears came running down my cheeks. |
This is very deep and sad.I love it.Sometimes i cut myself over my boyfriend because he makes me mad.well my ex but still i no it's wrong and i shoudnt do it.But great poem 5/5 keep up the good work. |
That is so lovley!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Wow Darien that was amasing even though it didnt rhyme it was one of the best poems i've ever read good work keep it up ^.^ check out mine sometime <3<3 |
by Kayla
I absolutely loved this one...so touching...it was almost as though I could feel your pain....very well written...nice job...5/5 for sure and you have made it onto my list of favorites...hehe...lucky you....lol...anyways great job...luv yas mwah |