How touching and sad. I like the flow and the pain behind this. I can also feel an emotional conflict... the love and hate ... great job reaching the reader

--Sher

thsi was so sad sweetie :( but i think its one of your best...hope your okay...
~Freak~

such sad writing, you got a good flow going there, and its so emotional!

XsaraX

That was a really sad hearfelt poem! You expressed your true feelings very well! Brooke~

This is really good... Sounds like it took a lot out of you to write this... Dont blame your father, It takes to much engery, be strong remember who you are, and remember he has nothing to do with who you've become... I know... Cuz Ive been put through the same thing...
Much Love
Xox Sherrie

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wow that was such a touching poem i liked it alot i think over 95% of american children are left with out a dad and/or gone through the same exact thing .... your poems are excellent!!!!

I love this poem. It is amazing. So much emotion! Remember they say whatever doesnt kill you, only makes you stronger! Great poem 5/5.

Kelly
xx

But you didn't listen, you didn't pursue

now that we're screwed, you wish to rewind

its good! the same thing happened to me and my mom! only i got kicked out at 17!