i actually wrote this poem in 8th grade and at that time it had only been two years so i had to change the word two to four. hope that maybe knowing what grade i was in when i wrote this will explain the context of it all. i think that since then i have grown a lot in my work. please tell me what you think about any of my poems

thanx...but it seems that all you do want to do is criticize...how would you know if i don't know the whole story...i was in eighth grade first of all when i wrote it and second of all my cousin right now is over in Iraq because of what they did...i wrote this poem four years ago...thanx at least for caring enough to rea it tho

i think its quiet good , i hink youve said that all needs to be said which it good . well done :)

OMG, so powerful! Although it was short, it was straight to the point of pain and how much your country has come together over this tough time! It doesnt really matter how old you were when you wrote it, you did an excellent job at conveying the meaning! 5/5 for me!! Keep it up!
Love Sarah
Xoxo
PLease check out my poems when your not busy

great poem! 5/5 def..plz vote/comment me bak..thnx