by Stacinator May 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Everything was perfect, |
by the middle
Another great poem! i really liked it! |
Another beautiful love poem. Very nice rhythm. |
by Darien
This is just as good as the first, and there's fresh ideas. Rhymes are good, and still you have the fillings. Your love poems make me smile :) |
by Brookeღ
You seem to end all of your poems in such a great way! The endings make the poems even better! You are a very talented writer! I am glad I have come across your work! I hope to read more! ~Brooke~ |
by celi
hey, nice poem! especially the last "paragraph" ! 5/5 |