Wow, powerful poem, well done I loved the last two lines they were really brilliant, keep writing xxx

great write. Stay strong! <3333

wow! that was really bootiful...

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very kool i liked it a lot

Hey, I really liked this poem, some lines were really powerful. Your poems are definately not bad, and if you are not happy with them, you just need to keep writing and learn new techniques etc. Keep it up :) Kim x

'To tell you all i meant to say.' i think that would sound better if you said,
'To tell you what i meant to say.'
i think it would flow better, but hey thats just me! great poem!