A song I can't sing

by Jenn   May 22, 2005


Daddy, you once told me
to stand up strong,
fight for my will,
and to sing that song

But my lungs are worn
and my chest is heaving
I don't have the strength
to keep on breathing

My heart is quickly
crinkling, wrinkling up
my mind is a windmill
that's had wind enough

My arms are aching
my knees so weak
my head is screaming
my thoughts so bleak

Daddy, I am slowly
giving in to the fight
my soul is burning
through the night

Daddy, don't pray on everything
for a song I can't sing

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  • 16 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    I wish it was longer so it had a conclusion! it sound like she has a disease or somthing thats killing her and shes giving up hope... but idk.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost2Life

    Love this, thanks for the comments on my poem, i look forward to reading more of yours.
    Rhys

  • 19 years ago

    by Unity

    ur a good writer , thanx for sending meh a message n writing a comment too meh :D .. ur a really great writer chickah ..keep up the good work