by Ann Stareyes
Sad but beautifully written. I'm so sorry that you are having a bad day. I hope things will get better for you sweetie. |
My sweet sweet Amanda, I'm so sorry that I wasn't here for you yesterday...I was just so low too....But now I wished that I was!!! Please be alright, talk to me....I need you here!! |
Ohh...I love this poem. I can't believe that you mother would say things like that.....This poem is really heartbroken. |
very nice. thats how i feel. |
by Brookeღ
A hug from me! So sorry you're feeling this way Amanda I wish there was something I could do! You can feel so much pain and sorrow when you read this! Take Care! Brooke~ |
Wow. Very powerful words. Keep this up. Terrific job. |
by Robert
This was alot better the story was very clear and the message was profound very well done I feel pat yourself on the back. Take Care... |
Great poem.. 5/5 |
Really good poem, had a lot of feeling to it. |
Really good poem, had a lot of feeling to it. |
Know how it feels...all thoughts rush around desperate to escape but unable to all at once...hang in there. |
by paulina.♥
This poem was amazing. I loved it. 5/5 |
by M MEM
Aww im sorry... its good to get your thoughts down while you have them |