Wow! Heather this poem was brilliant! I agree with the person above me..it was quite different..but it was amazing!! It touched my heart like you wouldn't believe! This peoce is great as well as your others! Another fantastic write by you my friend!
Have a wonderful day and God Bless!
~Chelsey~

Wow, That Was Amazing!!
I Wish I Had Wrote That One Instead :P

Well Done,

Failed

Heather as always a pleasure to read
and thanks for the pic of you and your B/F you make a cute couple...
5/5
Dave.....

Heather,
You are truly a gifted and beautiful writer. And this one truly A Masterpiece. You truly are one of the best writer's that I know of. You keep it up because you have already reached the top. Beautiful and I'm speechless. hugs, love, *Ann*

really creative and nice different point of view to see! great job!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

great poem!

That was very beautiful...I enjoyed it. The idea was well thought out and the poem well written, keep writing, good job!
Dorotea
p.s I appreciate your comment, thanks so much!

Amazing poem, Heather! It made me think of another poem called Lost Marvels of the World! Not sure if you've read it but here's the link- http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=299887

Oh yeah, thanx for the pic (yall are cute)~Holly

That was wonderful, really beautiful, It made me think and was a master piece, well done to you, keep it up

I just loved this poem!!! It was so very beautiful and incredibly expressed. Superb. 5/5:)

it wierd how other people things for granted and not know what they have until they lose it and this shows not something losing what they have but only gaining more happiness inside rather than seeing the happiness i think that this poem what wonderful you really should keep writing inspiring poems like this cause it might end up helping a lot of people see what they have

That is most excellent.

Ohh Heath,that was so sweet and smart ! i loved it ! i loved the idea it was so creative, and its so sad to be blind being unable to see alot of beautiful things out there, she might felt those beautiful things, but still it's not so enough !!!

Excellent.

much Respect,
Rua Francis

Very inspiring and beautifully written. Keep up the awesome work. Love it!!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela