its so cute!!!!

awwwwwwwwwww...sweet sweet.so sweet.

EXCELLENT job.... I wish I could write like you. It was so sweet and very heart warming. Keep up the good work. VERY inspirantional. If you get the chance, will you read mine and vote and comment on the please. I really would appricate it. Keep on writing.

I love it

A beautifully well written poem! 5!

aww that's bout the sweetest poem ever5/5

This is a pretty good little poem, you have a nice way of writing! if you get a chance, i'd like it if you looked at my poem, "Untitled 23". Thanks, Sarah

omg this poem was off the huck I really enjoy your writing your words really hit home your thought in this poems was truly amazing i really can't stress how good your poem is .......but can you please check out my poem it's called i got question and be looking forward for some more of my work.

Hard to believe that your only fourteen
the way you write is so pristine
i can't wait to read what you write when your twenty-four
i bet you a book deal you will score!!!

keep up the good work!
i am very impressed!
God Bless!

Good job this is great!! 5/5

Simply great work.... lovely poem