by lisa marie May 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
When the sailing clouds finally break |
Wonderful ending.... the combination of love and the environ. always works well.. great work |
by lisa marie
the rhyme scheme was changed on purpose... |
by Natalie84
You painted a picture in my mind and you kept me interested throughout. I love the imagery in it.... |
by ~*Ley*~
this was really sweet. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work |
aw its so beautiful! love is a....uh...lovely...thing....u did an excellent job on the rhyming nd it flowed so nicely i loved every line!! great job 5/5!! |