Expressed your anger and love well! I went through the same thing. The fact is they will never change. You have to be strong and move on. Easier said than done I know. Good work and good luck to you! Take Care! Brooke~

Wow. Great poem. A lot of emotion. I know how you feel.

The truth is always in disguise,
Over and over again I fall for your lies,

I like that part the best. Great job. Keep this up!

Love much,
Tiff

I HATE THE LIES TOO GREAT POEM5/5

Very nice poem! I can really relate to this poem! 5

Great poem!!! 5/5

talent talent talent, thats what i have to say, you certainly got it!! keep it up! 5/5!!

I feel you on this one too. wow...i remember when i used to feel like this...its almost like it was yesterday....wait it was....lolz...well another 5/5 u r good and i love the way that u write u have to give love as many chances as it needs...

I loved that!! it was SO good. 5/5

And yet i still dont hate you.. i keep giving myself to you.. i need to stop

I found it interesting..... and different.... but most deffinently good

I fell in love with a man that verbally abused me and this is so much like the situation....i left him and he realised what he did he begged me back-i let him back n now he has totally changed hopefully this si what u will find if ur poem is a real life experience..i hope the best 4 u..keep writin ur poems r realistic and incredible