by lynn
awww..... i am all teary eyed. that was sooooooooo sweet!! stay strong and let steph know that if she kills herself then you want have n-e one and you may kill yourself then everyone else may begin to fall along and there will be no one left. stay strong and keep encouraging her to stop cutting herself b/c though her real sister died she still has a sister-you-! take care and stay strong! |
Wow, this was so amazing really touching!!! I can't believe that this is a true story, I'm so sorry for your loss and I really hope that stephanie is going to be ok??? Been there done that, I tried to commit suicide a few months ago...Never thought that some one would care!!! I hope that you can both be strong and hang in there....I'm always here if you need to talk!!! I send you my best wishes... |
by Cristin
Wow! I'm really sorry this had to happen to you. It's a great write though. I hope Stephanie is okay and it's not only Stpehanie who needs to stop cutting you do too. not trying to sound like im ordering you or anyhting. Check out my poem: She died because of love her heart no one could save. I think you'll like it. |
Aww that was a very good and sad poem i really loved that poem 5/5. Keep ya head up and keep writing poems like that you'll make very far in life. STAY STRONG and i hope everything goes okay with Stephanie and you also. |
by Cara
that was an excellent poem! i loved it so much. I hope when people read your poem and they are wanting to do the same, i hope they stop and think of how it affects everyone around them. anyways it was an awsome poem. |
by Nikki
I give the best of luck to u and ur friends |
by Denise
Your poems are great. Your first poem about Danielle commiting suicide made me cry because my bestfriend also had just commited suicide, so if you ever need to talk, i'm going through many things so i can understand. Good Luck! |
by LostDreamer
WOW.. that's a great poem.. very sad though.. please tell stephanie* that we're praying for her recovery.. for too.. it must be hard going through all of this... ur a great writer keep up.. stay strong! |
i am sorry to hear of this tragidy but it is good to get your true feelings written down. God Bless and take care. 5 |
by otto
your a great writer, a great writer |
hey your poem is great i know it is hard i have alot of problems similar but you always have to look for the silver lineing in thinkgs i know that might sound a bit corny but it's the truth may god be with you always and remember to stay strong and fight the only thing that will make things go more wrong is if you dont keep your spirits high just hope for the bes and dont think neggitivly you and your love ones shall prevail luv ya bunches chelsea |
i liked this poem, it was good. really sad and i hope ur friend doesn't do that either. i knoe wat its like to loose someone really really close to u...hope things work out. |
by RachelAnne
wow, i tried it once |
by Kristin
I wish you the best of luck. |
by Samantha
that is an amazing poem, i hope you keep it up, you are an amazing writter. it is sad to hear that, but im glad you can talk about it...keep it up |
by Nina
This is a very sad poem. Unfortunatley so many people either attempt or do commit suicide. |
by Lucy D1am0nd
this poem is so sad and i hope you both get throw this bad time together. i love your poem. |
by ChAnTeL
your poem has so much emotion i haven't cut before or tried anything but my friend has and i know for someone watching it its really scary i really truly hope that everything works out for the best |
by foreverhappy
Your poems are so wonderful. I mean they bring just a little hope for the rest of the world. I'm sorry about Danny but I'm glad Stephanie is okay. I don't even know what to say. Great...Amazing poem. I'm truly sorry. |
by Rachel leigh
this is very well written.. and i can tell it comes from your heart. i wish you all the best and hope that all works out for you. please stay strong and positive. all stephanie needs is someone like you to be there pushing her. from being in her position you need to make sure she knows how much you care about her and how much you love her. phycologically she harms herself because she feels unloved, so please tell her how you feel, that could save her life.. much love! rachel |