A very sweet poem and its from your heart.

L x

Very good in a fluffy kinda way an ok write keep trying

thats a sweet poem....your friend is lucky to have you as someone to confide in and trust. great job.

Short, sweet and to the point-bravo.

nice,short and meaningful i liked it keep it up!!

Very simple. You ask nothing more than "Forever" of your best "Friend" and will hopefully receive that in return.

sooo sweet, there very lucky to have you as a friend

XsaraX

<3 i shall keep writing only 'cos I lobe you though

Good poem! it was very cute! 5

awesome poem ur r short but say alot 5/5

Sweet, made the point well, worked well as a poem, keep it up

well done