by Tammy
Absolutely beautiful poem...well worth the wait :o) |
thats rele great. i think its awesome how you included the scripture and still got a great rhytm |
by Rylee
that was way good it made me cry please comment on mine many thanks Rylee |
by LAST RONIN
good writing.. very diffrent from most poems on the site |
wow, absolutely beautiful, i loved this...great job once again! |
thank you everyone........i really appreciate your comments! |
thats an awesome message!!! thanks for commenting on my site! god bless |
by Emily
Great adjectives, and it really sucks in the reader! 5/5 |
by Just Lucy
Some thorns were placed upon him |
by Andrea
omgosh...i loved this poem! awesome job on it...5/5 |
by Britney
Awesome poem... its great how you can provide such a powerful message and still make it rhyme. Loved it! 5/5! |
by Lydia O
You took a meaningful subject and wove it into an excellent poem. It is well written, has good flow and rhyme pattern. Great job! |
by catalina
Wow...breathtaking...im inspired..great job girl!! :) |