Comments : Scattered shards of heart

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    Wow, oh my gosh! It's exceptionally beautifully and you should be extremely proud of it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is a great poem hun, really good imagery. Thanx 4 wat u hav sed 2 me...U don't no how much it means 2 me 2 hear it :)
    Emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    u are such an excellent writer and u should be so proud of urself! i think ur the best on this site! u have such a talent and the way u realted it all to the fragile jar and the candle was brill. flowed excellently
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    I love the imagery of the candle in this, perfect.

    first just a crack, then another
    result in a break as the cracks grew and grew
    like this jar, my heart lies in pieces
    still, these pieces will always love you

    your last stanza always seems to finish off the poem so so well i dnt know how u do it!! Beautiful, and the imagery was brilliant

    xxxxx