Insperation poem

by MelindaJoy   May 23, 2005


Hold on long
And keep pulling on strong
Even though everything
Is going wrong
Maybe someone makes
You feel like you don’t belong
But God put you here for one reason
And it’s not to be treason
You’ve got to stop
Looking at all the bad
And just try to be glad
For all that you have
If you have nothing now
You’ll have something
To look forward to
In the future
Just have to wait
And it shall be fate
Even if it’s just a soul mate
Who gets in your way
Realize that your relationship
Will turn to fade
And if they are the right one
Then your life
Will soon begin
So stop saying
You have problems
And no one will listen
Because someone is always there for you
Even if you don’t believe it
Stop turning to the knife
And trying to end your life
Because you’ll always be
Hurting not just yourself
But the one that was their for you
Till the very end

*I know this poem hasn’t to do with anything about depression extra, but the only place I could think to put it, I am/was like that, and hopefully it will help all you out, the way it helped me when I realized it, and if you still believe that no one will listen, Ill be here, to help anyone out, so please comment and rate, plus tell me if this belonged*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pinto Bean Power

    I used to be like that... but I had my friends who got pissed off at me and told me to knock it off because they still cared. That made all the difference. This poem helps people alot... and omg I'm writing a long comment. Eh? Good poem and keep on writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ryko

    Good Message you are getting across, only downfall is the rhymes seem to be a little desperate. Keep writing your good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Polly

    yeah i think this is like in the right category because depression poems dont have to be about being depressed they can be about getting through it aswell. It's a great poem but I really dont agree. I am having a seriously bad time at the moment and there is nothing that is going to get me out of this. Keep it up all the same
    Polly ~X~