yeah i think this is like in the right category because depression poems dont have to be about being depressed they can be about getting through it aswell. It's a great poem but I really dont agree. I am having a seriously bad time at the moment and there is nothing that is going to get me out of this. Keep it up all the same
Polly ~X~

Good Message you are getting across, only downfall is the rhymes seem to be a little desperate. Keep writing your good!

I used to be like that... but I had my friends who got pissed off at me and told me to knock it off because they still cared. That made all the difference. This poem helps people alot... and omg I'm writing a long comment. Eh? Good poem and keep on writing.