wow this poem is amazin, its really good. dnt 4get im always here 4 u!! love ya loads xxxxxxxxxx

Aww babe *hug* dont let him bring you down babe, and dont leave and be strong, no cutting please babe, for me
I love you

this is like great! i love it is rhymes it flows its great! i totally know how you feel im gonna add you to my faves if that's alrgith cos i love the poem! keep it up and take care
Polly ~X~

I like what the poem is trying to say. I’ve had something similar happen to me with a guy before
I though the way you used your sentences made it more interesting instead of just picking words that rhyme and don’t go. Nice piece of work
5/5

Hunni....thats great....lil confused as to who its about though.... ben? or bill? but thats me being me! you know what im like!
im always here for you...
love you loads
xxxxxxx

this is such a sweet poem

so sad, can relate though and flows real well! xxx

"You told me you were always going to be there for me
But everytime I was down you would act as if you could not see
The pain thats growing inside of me, killing me."

I can relate to that really well. It was a great poem. Great job!!!

Love Rachel

I'm in a realtionship actually right now but i kinda feel the same i mean i know she says she loves me but i think sometimes those are really mellow words..have words lost there meaning? but u did a great job on that poem

I know what that feels like. It sucks right? yeah anyways, great poem. i gave it a five.

You know...not that i'm saying everyguy...but some guys are really a jerk...they do something wrong but they don't think it's wrong...hmmm...someone must point out to them...they tend to think everything that they do is never wrong...

The message is clear and i understand...but i think you can play with the structure and the words? Kind of confusing...

It's really a sad poem. Also a wonderful poem!

Liked the poem but i dislike blood! n cuttin your sen!! but part from that i liked it alot!! 5/5

Girl, This poem is so awesome..
you are the best <3
5/5