by Ã맆îñ¥ May 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Can you see behind my curtain? |
by Willow
I liked this poem. to me it sounded sort of mysterious, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but I liked it. On my With You poem, and girl commented that it sounded like I forced rhymes. I was wondering if you could show me some, if u think any r forced. |