Comments : My last try

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Been a while girl. Welcome back.
    Nicelly written poem I say. Good word use, and good content. Just don't wait too long for the same guy too many times. The world is full of surprises, some bether than the last.
    Tim

  • 19 years ago

    by Jolene

    thanks- it's good to know that there is actually hope! still trying to figure it out, but i guess ill get there soon enough! thanks for reading tim! lmao!

  • 19 years ago

    by joe

    i agree, i think it was a good peice but more important, you can only try so hard, you can only give so much till you realize that your never goin to get what you want if the other person isnt willing to do the same. If they arent then that means you will find something better...
    take care
    -Allen =)