by Ixora
i like ur poem a lot...but dont give up yet...or whoever this poems talking bout...just tell that prsn (b ir u or someon else) that it wud make ur life much better if u just piss them off...it helped me ;) but hey good job anyway love ur work .. |
wow. very nice. i don't think you should say that tho. cuz someone will always care. always. whether you know it or not. |
Such a sad poem. I hope it isn't true. Great job. |
by crystle
this is a very good poem it relates to my life in three million ways i am so glade that you can write about this i give you a 5. |
by HH
If you ever need anyone to talk to I will talk to you. i am always here. It's such a great poem and I think it expresses a lot of feeling. Keep it up! |
by La_Rona_13
WOW girl! This poem describes my pain too! You're a really good writer. |
by selina
Is this true? |
by JL
amazing poem! this poem is so tru! ur n awesome writer :) |
by *mekala*
ouch,i feel ur pain and totally understand wat ur going thro...life sucks sometimes. |
DEEP. srsly. Luvd it. |
by Danielle
God, I understand. I can relate so much. My mom does the same thing. but I love her because she doesn't tell anyone else. She talks about it to me all the time too. I hope you're okay though. Will you read this... "A Broken Girl -- A Broken Life" |
by sara
i cant belive how great this poem is it says how i feel excatly your a greal poem keep writing i wish i could put my feeling in writing as good as you do |
this is beautiful |
by kaitlyn
I love your poem,a blade is everybodys best friend, I feel the words to your poem..they bring tears to my eyes.. |
by Jordan
This poem was excellent! I loved it. And I know what it feels like. |
by Lost Girl
This is so sad but very impressive writing, I love everything about it (sorry to sound lame) really like the way you write...stay strong |
by Krystal
your a really good poem writer.....they kinda sound like mine.....so i guess i kno how you feeling....u should read some of mine somtimes...once i put more on here |
by amanda v
WOW!!!!!!!!!! that broght tears to mt eyes that kinda sounds like my life... |
Those knives I know. 'Tis an ever-lasting addiction. But kudos never the less.. =) |
by MyMercy
wow that was great! excellent use of vocabulary...i hope ur ok...well ur a great writer so keep it up! |