by ~*^*~ longing to belong ~*^*~ May 23, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Hannah knows her mom is ill, |
by paulina.♥
I loved this poem, dear. Especially the verse about Phillip. Very nice. Keep writing! |
by EoB
Very good poem...I love how you use those two lines over and over again... |
wow! so good omg, so true i luv it... it's so emotional and deep and honest! much luv, mandie :) |
by Victoria
Good poem I like how you take us through the stages of each persons fate. |
by Eden
Indeed, you are correct on my poem Your Blood Was Mine :) I just read this one and I found it to be excellently written. You enabled a regular idea to have a tinge of bright color and flavor. Awesome job on this poem. And thank you for your comment :) |