I swear i was sober

by Tamila Bob   May 23, 2005


I was dancing
in my bra
party'in real hard
but then monday came
and then came school
AND NO ONE WOULD
LOOK ME IN MY EYES
i don't reget
the night
just the fact
that no one will
talk to me at all

one night of fun
and no one at that
dang party will speak to me

o well ;0)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    I think this poem would be alot more entertaining with some exsamples of what went on at that party or the way you felt the morning after. Abit more detail would go along way into making this poem hold its water. Just a thought take care. If you could gaze at my featured poems it would mean alot to me thanks please comment and vote too...

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