your beautiful smile
your young brown eyes
all these thing
i greatly despise

I love that part. And this part too

your performance was a great one
so go ahead and take a bow

Wow, such a great poem. It is excellent. I love it! I wish I could give it higher then 5!

Love much,
Tiff

I can really relate to this poem. I thought the rhyming was excellent and it flowed wonderfully, although it was very sad, I still loved it. Great Job ♥