Failing Societies Test

by Jacklyn   May 23, 2005


Failing societies test,
Not trying to please the critics,
I’m only trying to be my best,
Of what my mind judges to be right,

If you don’t like me, I’ll learn to live,
I won’t get hung over seeking for revenge,
Everyone has a right to an opinion,
Not everyone has to think the same.

How the world follows the media,
The images that they engrave,
Fat ass, big boobs and skinny waist,
The image in the mirror you must change,

But I am happy as I am,
Walking with Freedom in my hand,
Failing the media’s point of view,
But winning the pride I seek.

~quick write, not that good, please vote and comment~

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I forgot to thank you for the comment. :P THANK U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I agree with everyone else you have sent a positive message in what you called a "quick write". I'm luvin your work everyday, Shawdy! Keep it right, keep it tite, ROC STEADY PEACE MUCH LUV LUV YA SO MUCH HAHAHA, //ARI\\

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    I liked the message in this poem, like kalah said, doesnt matter that it was a quick write it still worked

    well done

    katie!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    I like it, it has a good message in it..stay strong
    xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nice work. I enjoyed it and I totally agree:)