As a poem within structure, your right, it lacked but the idea you stirred up is definatly worth the read. We share a mutual feeling, hun. You have an awesome mind. Love you! 5/5

It may have been a quick write hun, but it tells a very decent message. There is no need to be what people want you to be! :D

Luvvo hun <3
\Kalah.

Nice work. I enjoyed it and I totally agree:)

I like it, it has a good message in it..stay strong
xxxxxxx

I liked the message in this poem, like kalah said, doesnt matter that it was a quick write it still worked

well done

katie!

I agree with everyone else you have sent a positive message in what you called a "quick write". I'm luvin your work everyday, Shawdy! Keep it right, keep it tite, ROC STEADY PEACE MUCH LUV LUV YA SO MUCH HAHAHA, //ARI\\

I forgot to thank you for the comment. :P THANK U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!